Friday, June 28, 2013

Count on it


Numbers can cause a multitude of problems in writing, but there are a few rules that will help you out.

The first, and most important rule, is consistency especially within the same category. Whichever method you use when putting numbers in your writing, it should be the same method throughout your article, story or novel. The second rule is, as always, study the publication (or another work from the same publisher) that you are writing for and duplicate the accepted style.

Some common rules to follow are:
§  Spell smaller numbers out, numbers with a value of less than twenty are often spelled out (one, two, fifteen, nineteen, etc) and use a numeral (22, 44, 101, etc) for anything larger. Note that MLA (Modern Language Association) generally says to spell out numbers less than ten.
§  If the number is part of a name, such as William III, use the numeral/symbol instead of William the third. Also use the third house on the right instead of the 3rd house on the right.
§  Spell out time periods and centuries like the seventies or the twentieth century. If you are using incomplete numerals for the decade, you can use an apostrophe before the number but NOT between the number and the “s”, ‘70s.
§  Commas are used as separators for large numbers, usually anything 1,000 and above.  Large, approximate numbers, can be a combination of numerals and spelled out such as 20-million, but an exact number would be all numerals like 23,434,999. Money is printed like $34.56, the period is used as a decimal point to separate the cents.
§  If you are writing a recipe, use numbers in the measurements like 3 cups of flour and  1 ½ tablespoon of butter. When writing fractions in prose, spell them out just like you say them: one-half, two-thirds, three-halves, etc. And except for the most informal notes, use the word percent (25 percent) instead of the symbol 25%.
§  Never begin a sentence with a numeral, spell it out if you can’t change the order. Use Twenty-one years ago I got married or I got married 21 years ago.


Writing Exercise:  You are sitting in the corner of a restaurant during a busy lunch hour. Describe the action that you see from your vantage point. Write it as if you are watching a movie so that your readers will SEE the action as you do.


Writing Prompt: Pick up the closest magazine or newspaper, study the first picture you come across. Write a three-sentence story based on that picture.