Friday, May 17, 2013

Short Shorts



Writing isn’t always putting thousands of words together which seems to deter some from the field. There are many opportunities to hone your craft in a sentence or two, or just a few words.

A picture may be worth a thousand words, but good captions don’t need more than a few. If possible your caption should be in the same style as any article that accompanies it – you can also study the usual style of the publication for a clue. Punctuate most captions like you would for a sentence, capitalize the first letters of the caption and proper names. If the subject in a photo has been thoroughly identified in the text of the article, you do not need to use more than a simple title, at most, and the person’s name. If there is more than one subject, provide some direction. Avoid unnecessary purple prose and speak in full sentences. Lastly, make sure to include proper attribution for each photo used.

Titles shouldn’t be more than a few words, if that many. Your title should catch someone’s attention but it should not be misleading, it needs to fit your article, story or novel. Choose a few descriptive words for your story and see if you can pull a title from those terms. For a short story or novel, you might choose a significant turning point, important phrase, reference to a location (if the location is important to the story) or even a character’s name as part of the title. Capitalization of titles may vary depending on the individual publication, but short of specific guidelines, there are two common rules: Capitalize only the first word of the title, or capitalize all proper nouns in the title.

You should always have short taglines, 25 and 50 word blurbs ready for your book. Although it might sound daunting to compress all the pages in your story down to a few sentences, think of the most important themes, the major conflict, a significant result, or historical significance to your story. Sometimes a blurb is called an elevator pitch – imagine that you have just the few minutes of an elevator ride to present (sell) your story to a publisher. Get the main thought out in as few words as possible. Romeo and Juliet, for example, could be sold with the words “A tragic and forbidden love set against the hatred of feuding families.” (12 words) Prepare these blurbs so that you can use them while you query publishers, help design your book jacket, and market your book with social media.

Writing abstracts can be a lucrative job and involves writing “summaries” of no more than 100 to 250 words. Thoroughly read the article that you need to write the abstract from, pick out key terminology. Ask basic questions for your notes like: What is the subject or study about? How was the study done? When and where did this happen? What is the overall conclusion? Use the answers to these questions to begin your abstract. Don’t re-use the title of the article as that will normally appear with the abstract anyway. Never add any information into the abstract that doesn’t appear in the original article.


Writing Exercise:  Choose a character from your book (or one from a recent book you’ve read). In your character’s words, describe a person (one who does NOT appear in the story) that had a significant impact on that character’s life.

Writing Prompt:  Pick up a daily newspaper, read each of the articles on the front page. Choose two or three words from each article that you feel are most significant; make a new heading for each of the articles using those words.